i still think you need to work on grammar and writing sentences. now you're using periods TOO much and make even less sense at times.example, "Even where I work just last week I told two of my anesthesia doctors(MDA). That I was going to the ASATT annual educational conference meeting. In San Francisco, California next month in October 2007."
we all know anesthesia docs are "MDA"s. so that right there is redundant, just like when you write AA program (anesthetist). anyways back to the sentence. those 3 sentences are fragments. lets separate them.
1)Even where I work just last week I told two of my anesthesia doctors(MDA).
you told them what?
2)That I was going to the ASATT annual educational conference meeting.
that just isnt a complete sentence.
3)In San Francisco, California next month in October 2007.
so in SF, CA... whats going on there?
sorry to be so anal, (i dont use a lot of punctuation), but your writing needs a lot of improvement.