A little addition to Thunder's message, just in case the authors feel like fixing stuff. I've only gone through the Raditz intro text so far, and already found a few typos:
- "posesses" instead of "possesses"
- "villianous" instead of "villainous"
And the following sentence is poorly worded: "Can Goku and Piccolo save his son!?", due to the fact "his son" doesn't fit with "Piccolo". Might be better as "Can Goku save his son with the help of Piccolo!?", or something along these lines.
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