Re: haiku
Posted by ABenis on April 9, 2020, 4:19 am, in reply to "
Re: NPA haiku"
You demonstrate how it is possible to pack a lot of information in just three lines! Some tips that I use: + the use of internal rhyme, rather than rhyming between lines * the third line is the most important. It should contain an element of surprise, abruptness, strange juxtaposition. or "a splash of cold water into one's face"... as in the following Pandemic haiku Corona-Shmerona Grandmothers are dying So the Dow won't go down
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