Trung captured the writing style of the first part pretty well. Even though my syntax is shitty already, I was trying to channel the writing of a certain kind of special person. The writing in Trung's story reminds me of Zero Wing.
As for the story itself the highlights were "not even Trung who eats everything as gospel" and "Iím sorry, if you said any other artist, hell even The Buggles I would have gladly say yes but what you asking is beyond the credibility of this website."
The twist ending is about as twisted as the first part's ending but makes complete logical sense to me. I'd even be willing to accept that Marvel is really Mcferrin
if George hadn't revealed that Adrian Denning posted both parts of the saga to send the innocent civilians of music babble on a witch hunt.
Still, maybe Ryan really is John. Why else would he write that Captain Marvel is dead?