Posted by Naomi poem2: this is my poem,
on 2/18/2003, 3:52 pm
213.122.146.250
I have just joined,so hello.
This is a poem i wrote out of sheer boredom it took less than a min' and as such it does not have a point,feedback is appreciated.I do not write on a regular basis in fact i rarely write at all,i hope to change this.
it's not too long,
although it ryhmes,
the spellings wrong,
the punctuations,
gone to hell,
i feel the grammer has as well,
it is not deep,
nor profound,
within it,
little meaning found,
there isn't any wisdom in it,
because it took but half a minute.
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