Re: I Never Said It Would Be GOOD...
Posted by Model Builder on 8/3/2011, 7:45 am, in reply to "I Never Said It Would Be GOOD..."
: But what really convinced Bobby, and everyone else — though
: Eric would never confess to it out loud — was Uni. Something
: about the man had caught her attention, and as tensions eased a
: bit, she edged forward, curiously, her eyes intent, studying him
: with sharp interest. He smiled at her when he noticed her
: scrutiny, and bent down slowly, pulling off a gauntlet to offer
: his hand as if she were a curious puppy. That image was
: reinforced as she sniffed at his fingers carefully, then
: brightened happily, her ears and tail flicking up as she let out
: a cheerful bleat. She liked him.
: “Ah. It seems I pass the test,” the man said, for even a baby
: Unicorn’s approval was no small thing. “Now then, I should think
: that introductions are finally in order. I am,” and here he gave
: a formal bow as if his audience were regal nobles in a royal
: court rather than six rag-tag kids in the middle of the woods,
: “Tolan, Lord of House Halloran of Yarfell.”
: —“Dastirum,” by Kryschenn
Well, the drawing looks very good to me. The prose, however . . . .
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