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Re: Shucked Morning

Posted by Elizabeth on 4/28/2005, 1:21 pm, in reply to "Shucked Morning"
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Good use of metaphor and very descriptive. A unique and well written poem. The only other thing I can think to say is a couple less of the ands.

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