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Re: CRUSHING LILIES

Posted by Windstorm on 3/21/2002, 11:28 am

I like the line "worse than their suckling toothless bite." Creative use of imagery!

Message Thread: CRUSHING LILIES - Gerald Bosacker 3/21/2002, 11:26 am Re: CRUSHING LILIES - Windstorm 3/21/2002, 11:28 am Re: CRUSHING LILIES - Gerald Bosacker 3/21/2002, 11:52 am « Back to thread

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