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Re: Visitation

Posted by Windstorm on 3/18/2002, 12:28 pm

Hmmmm very good work. There is something familiar about your poetry! I guess the only part where I thought the poem tripped was when it spoke of bells tolling! In a poem so far from cliche, it just seemed a bit of a step out of the poem, but then you stepped back in smoothly! I wanna post this one on my site. : )

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