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Re: Father be me

Posted by Methods on 8/26/2008, 5:35 am, in reply to "Re: Father be me"
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I really like some of those lines, in others in my opinion you're being a bit too factual. Which reminds me - TOO*, not to That last line is a really good closer. To me, if you were able to get some of it right, you have the potential to make it happen - keep writing!

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